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[xiphias]

For the Day Before The Chocolate Goes On Sale
I promised Lis a sonnet I would write.
She's teased me that I'm going to fail
And she's going to mock me from morn to night.
So I've got to write this thing
To try to save me from her playful scorn.
Her loving jabs have some bit of sting
As well as the love of which those jabs are born.
So even though you can be such a playful bitch
I can't express how much you make me rich.

Comments

Can you haiku?

[cheshyre]

And you said nothing good rhymed with your name...

A well-meaning husband named Ian
Had promised a poetic paeon.
For his wife, a sonnet;
Poured his heart upon it.
But so far she's just a'tee-hee-in'

I love you!

Re: Can you haiku?

[cheshyre]

Correction. Line two should be written paean not paeon

Re: Can you haiku?

[rebmommy.livejournal.com]

You two are so well matched! Soul-mates, you think?

[chaiya.livejournal.com]

I think this is adorable. :)

[banshee99.livejournal.com]

HA! Ha ha ha! Too cute. =D

[rebmommy.livejournal.com]

You Funny Valentine - nice sonnet. It's good to fulfill your promises. Happy Valentine's Day.