yup, that works for me. especially the "married ... seeks someone" part. turns me right off, whereas none of the other stuff does. no indication of polyamory -- *ick*, indiscriminate partner seekage -- double *ick*. i don't care about the rest of the stuff one way or another. i like the sense of humour, but there's too little for me to be sure of it.
well done! the only problem is that it is probably no longer a valid personal ad, because it _just_ deters, it might not attract anyone anymore. be fun to post it somewhere and see what happens.
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ye olde "unappealing" personal ad
Date: 2007-09-25 04:31 am (UTC)well done! the only problem is that it is probably no longer a valid personal ad, because it _just_ deters, it might not attract anyone anymore. be fun to post it somewhere and see what happens.